Friday 28 July 2017


Welcome back to Term 3!

For literacy we had to create a Persuasive Person! I chose to persuade everyone to go to the beach instead of the snow because the beach is warmer than the snow. There is lots of fun things to do at the beach, my favourite thing is to go SURFING!


3 comments:

  1. Hi Kahlo,I liked the way you decorated it and layed it out.Maybe next time you could make the font bigger.Keep up the good work.

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  2. Hi Kahlo its Trent here I like how you made it look really good. Next time you could make it a little bigger. Keep up the good work.

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  3. Hi Kahlo. I love surfing to nice work by the way the writing is a little hard to see but other than that you did really good keep up the work.
    Isaiah

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